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sonicstormer38 Member


Posts: 1894 Join date: 2010-12-18 Age: 17 Location: Why do you need this information again?
 | Subject: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Fri Jan 14, 2011 9:40 am | |
| Credit goes to GRIM for ripping the original Sketch Turner sprites and ZephyerDK for the preview. Everything else was made by me. INFORMATION | Spoiler: | | | Name: Sketch Turner Series: Comix Zone Appearance on Nintendo Console: Comix Zone (Originally released on the Genesis, but was later ported to the GBA. It also appeared on the Japanese version of Sonic Mega Collection.) Size: Same height as Naruto Weight: 105, according to this Speed: 4.3, according to this Jump: 2.3, according to this Falling speed: 1.6, according to this Special Abilities: No |
Entrance- (Hold the first frame for a second.) Stance-  Walk-  Run- (Note: Speed up the walk.) Turn Around-  Jump-  Double jump-  Back jump-  Back double jump-  Falling-   Land-  Basic combo
 Neutral Special: Paper Plane Toss
 Projectile-  Air
(Note: This animation is slightly faster than on the ground as Sketch is affected by gravity. Also, the tear is on a separate animation.) Tear-  Description: Sketch rips of some paper from the 'wall' and throws a paper plane from the paper he ripped off. The paper plane travels in a straight line and stops when it hits an opponent/wall. The paper plane does 5% damage and average knockback if it hits an opponent. Side Special: Knife Throw
 Knife- Grenade-  Explosion- (Will need to be made faster) Air
 Description: Sketch gets out a knife and throws it. The knife does 3% damage and low knockback if it hits an opponent. There is a 1/5 chance that Sketch will throw a grenade instead of a knife. A grenade will be affected by gravity. The grenade will explode on impact and do 15% damage and high knockback if it hits an opponent. Up Special: Frame Flip
 Example of how it should look-  Air
 Description: A comic frame appears above Sketch, which Sketch will then grab and flip himself upwards. If Sketch makes contact with anyone when he flips, the opponent takes 10% damage and will be knocked upwards. Down Special: Roadkill Getting out/putting away Roadkill-  Roadkill motions: Stance-  Walk-  Turn around-  Attack-  Damage-  Air
(Sketch can't pick up Roadkill in the air. Roadkill will fall from Sketch until it hits the ground.) Air Roadkill motions: Fall-  Land-  Description: Sketch gets out his rat, Roadkill. Roadkill moves freely along the ground and will chase after enemies if they get too close. If an opponent gets too close to Roadkill, Roadkill will do an electric shock, which does 7% damage and average knockback. Roadkill can't harm Sketch with this attack. Roadkill can take damage, but Roadkill can only die if it falls of the edge of a stage, or if Sketch dies (In which it will vanish.) Once Roadkill is out, Sketch can't use his down special again unless Roadkill dies or if Sketch is next to Roadkill, in which he will put Roadkill away. Forward Smash Smash-  Up Smash Smash-  Down Smash- Smash-  Neutral air-  Up air-  Forward air-  Back air-  Down air-  Aeriel Lands-  Crouch-  Down tilt-  Up tilt-  Forward tilt-  Dash attack-  Grab miss-  Grab-  Pummel-  Foward throw-  Projectile- (The knife moves fast enough to hit the player thrown before they land.) Up throw-  Back throw-  Down throw-  Dynamite- (The player thrown is unable to move until the dynamite explodes.) Explosion- (Will need to be made faster) Final Smash: Super Sketch Attack-  Projectile: (Read description for how projectile should be used.) Rip in 'wall'- (This appears where the projectiles travelled, and vanishes a few seconds later.) Example of how it should look-  Description: This is similar to the Super Sketch attack that appeared in Comix Zone. Sketch transforms into Super Sketch and punches the ground with his fist. At this point, everyone on the stage will be unable to move for a brief moment, and anyone in the air will be knocked downwards. Also, when Sketch punches the ground, two blasts shoot out from either side of his fist at fast speeds. Anyone who gets hit by either of the blasts reives 40% damage and very high knockback. Sketch returns to normal after the attack has happened. Guard-  Back Roll-  Forward Roll-  Sidestep-  Air dodge-  Tech-  Wall-Tech-  Wall-Jump-  Shield Break (Dizzy)-  Sleep-  Wake up-  Hurt 1 (Hit)-  Hurt 2 (Sent Flying)-  Hurt 3 (Dead)-  Hurt 4 (Getting back up)-  Get-up attack-  Edge lean- (Will need to be slowed down.) Hang-  Ledge attack-  Ledge roll-  Assist trophy- (Will need to be slowed down.) Hammer-  Item Swing-  Fire Flower Hold-  Walk While Using Item-  Item Shoot-  Item toss- Forward:  Up:  Down:  Back:  Hold heavy object-  Walk w/heavy object-  H.O Throw- Forward:  Up:  Down:  Wall-Hit-  Climb ladder-  Ride down ladder-  Swim-  Drown-  G&W Ball-  Super Spicy Curry-  Electric Hit-  Up Taunt-  Side Taunt-  Down Taunt-  Win-  Lose/clap-  Revival Platform-  Misc:
Damage meter-  Selection-   Series icon-  Trophies: Classic-  Adventure-  All-star-  Final Smash-  Preview- 
Attacks and Sound Effects Main theme: Win Theme: (Use the first 15 seconds.)
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Octocat Member


Posts: 2600 Join date: 2010-09-29 Age: 18 Location: I WILL FIND MY PARENTS AAAAAAAA
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Fri Jan 14, 2011 9:54 am | |
| I can't tell you enough how much I love that entrance. |
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Friesnchip Member


Posts: 498 Join date: 2010-07-07 Age: 19 Location: New Hampshire, United States
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Fri Jan 14, 2011 10:15 am | |
| | Mari Futanari wrote: | | I can't tell you enough how much I love that entrance. | I agree, but I noticed that the basic combo isn't animated in place, and the when he rips the paper from the wall in the neutral special the tear moves from where it started. Just something to look out for, is all._________________ Click This  Fries' DA ---> http://friesnchip.deviantart.com |
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Dark Lord Member


Posts: 387 Join date: 2010-07-02 Age: 16 Location: Australia
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Fri Jan 14, 2011 6:46 pm | |
| I love it, you've got my vote.
But yeah, please look out for the things mentioned above to make it work in the future. |
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L-rM Member

Posts: 1027 Join date: 2010-07-02 Age: 15 Location: Yeah, I'm...yeah.
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Fri Jan 14, 2011 6:53 pm | |
| I can't believe it's not butter Big enough. I'm also in love with the entrance but could you make the Neutral special a bit smoother,when he throws it there's like one frame in between making it look choppy. |
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Soldiershak Member

Posts: 92 Join date: 2010-09-12 Age: 18
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Fri Jan 14, 2011 7:57 pm | |
| Good to see an expansion of him too bad his actual game was short I've been hoping for a second game but to play him in ssf2 is awesome |
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sonicstormer38 Member


Posts: 1894 Join date: 2010-12-18 Age: 17 Location: Why do you need this information again?
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:09 am | |
| | Friesnchip wrote: | | Mari Futanari wrote: | | I can't tell you enough how much I love that entrance. | I agree, but I noticed that the basic combo isn't animated in place, and the when he rips the paper from the wall in the neutral special the tear moves from where it started. Just something to look out for, is all. |
I'll try to sort out the problems when I get the chance.
Edit: Update! New animations have been added. |
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sonicstormer38 Member


Posts: 1894 Join date: 2010-12-18 Age: 17 Location: Why do you need this information again?
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Sat Jan 15, 2011 12:57 pm | |
| Update! Added some more animations and fixed the combo. _________________  sonicstormer38's expansions (In order of completion/priority) | Quotes: | | | LitoYoshi- Suddenly! Sonicstormer made epic expansions!
Good job as usual bro.
Noob-Fangled- This expansion is coming along tremendously well.
This is going to be one of my first downloads for sure, after I download all of my own expansions.
Kiki- Very well done, I could see this in game.
roody9000- I support this 100% and think all of this is amazing! I Love You! ShadowHunter- I agree, this is one of the most epic expansions I've seen. Can't wait to download it.
The Spy- Oh my god Sonicstormer that looks so much better then mine, amazing job!
Lukepi- This is an awesome start, on an awesome expansion, made by an awesome person. Keep up the good work. :3 |
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Soldiershak Member

Posts: 92 Join date: 2010-09-12 Age: 18
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:28 am | |
| His neutral should o some sort of damage on him.It made sense in the game since he was rip part of the page.Idk about it hurting him anymore.....ehh nvm.I wanted t work on him but you got it better than me lol.When you finish this I think you should make an expansion of the last boss or that red android I think its name was grievece. |
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sonicstormer38 Member


Posts: 1894 Join date: 2010-12-18 Age: 17 Location: Why do you need this information again?
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:31 am | |
| | Soldiershak wrote: | | His neutral should o some sort of damage on him.It made sense in the game since he was rip part of the page.Idk about it hurting him anymore.....ehh nvm.I wanted t work on him but you got it better than me lol |
That was the original idea I had. I'll change it. |
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Octocat Member


Posts: 2600 Join date: 2010-09-29 Age: 18 Location: I WILL FIND MY PARENTS AAAAAAAA
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Mon Jan 17, 2011 3:49 pm | |
| I think attacks that deal damage to the player is among the reasons they took Pichu out of SSB. Don't do it. |
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Chaosvii7 Princess

Posts: 1378 Join date: 2010-07-28 Age: 19 Location: Playing with other boys.
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:30 pm | |
| Your entrance and revival platform are way too fucking big.
Seriously. |
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sonicstormer38 Member


Posts: 1894 Join date: 2010-12-18 Age: 17 Location: Why do you need this information again?
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Wed Jan 19, 2011 1:11 pm | |
| Update: Added more animations, including side and down specials, win, and lose.
Oh, and in case you haven't noticed, the neutral special's 'dealing damage to Sketch' has been removed. _________________  sonicstormer38's expansions (In order of completion/priority) | Quotes: | | | LitoYoshi- Suddenly! Sonicstormer made epic expansions!
Good job as usual bro.
Noob-Fangled- This expansion is coming along tremendously well.
This is going to be one of my first downloads for sure, after I download all of my own expansions.
Kiki- Very well done, I could see this in game.
roody9000- I support this 100% and think all of this is amazing! I Love You! ShadowHunter- I agree, this is one of the most epic expansions I've seen. Can't wait to download it.
The Spy- Oh my god Sonicstormer that looks so much better then mine, amazing job!
Lukepi- This is an awesome start, on an awesome expansion, made by an awesome person. Keep up the good work. :3 |
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Octocat Member


Posts: 2600 Join date: 2010-09-29 Age: 18 Location: I WILL FIND MY PARENTS AAAAAAAA
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Wed Jan 19, 2011 3:16 pm | |
| You still haven't fixed his neutral special. |
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Dark Lord Member


Posts: 387 Join date: 2010-07-02 Age: 16 Location: Australia
 | Subject: Re: [Comix Zone] Sketch Turner (COMPLETED) Wed Jan 19, 2011 5:13 pm | |
| Past 3 Votes. Accepted.
Please fix is Neutral Special though. |
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