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PostSubject: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:20 pm

Yeah, I decided to make one, since I like art like stuff...

(Characters are color coded. Same Color=From same category.)
Animals=Red
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VGC's=Yellow

Parakeet
WARNING: Incredibly length long picture.
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Karine
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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:37 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:39 pm

This is quite good. I like it.
If you added shading, and added more detail, you could sell it at an art show. XD
and also, we're ALL dorks here, man.
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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:41 pm

I guess it's okay.
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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:43 pm

Well...

Your bird anatomy is not so bad, but I think you screwed up the legs a bit.
I suggest you to look at real birds images, then try to reproduce what you saw.

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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:50 pm

Yeah, I know, it's not very good. I'm guessing it's just good for a ten minute sketch.

I was always more of the musical kind of art guy anyways.
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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Fri Nov 18, 2011 6:02 pm

Tao-Sensei wrote:
Don't you just love parakeets?

Yeah, they're my favorite food.
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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Fri Nov 18, 2011 6:14 pm

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Umm, if you want me to put it in the most critical way I can say...
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If it was critical you would actually SAY what's wrong with it instead of saying it's crap.

Anyways, it looks not half bad. The lines look a bit squiggly, and it'll look better if it had shading(If you know how to shade well). You need to separate the fur and the legs. To that you'd just have to have a bit of fur between them to tell which is the leg and fur. The lines on the wing looks bad though, it looks like you went a bit lazy thar. And lastly, the feet needs to be wrapped more around the branch or stick.
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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Fri Nov 18, 2011 7:01 pm

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Umm, if you want me to put it in the most critical way I can say...
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Don't listen to him.

He doesn't understand that people aren't made of boxes, so he's probably wrong about bird anatomy, too.

It's fine, yeah the legs need work, but it's certainly not crap.
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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Fri Nov 18, 2011 7:03 pm

Well, actually, I drew another Parakeet a few classes before this that looks the same, because I thought it might be too small though, I did a redraw, as the one you see here. I could show the original if you want, I think it's better.
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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Sat Nov 19, 2011 5:18 pm

Fucking hell, that's the last time I say anything about judging art at this forum.
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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Sat Nov 19, 2011 9:11 pm

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Nicko wrote:
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Don't listen to him.


TOTAL HIPOCRACY MAN. NOT COOL.

That bird... it's shape and texture are so off. The seem a bit rough, and how you say, "perfected." Like a remastered show looks less realistic but more for graphics. Too round at the top, a bit too straight around the wings and torso.
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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Thu Nov 24, 2011 5:52 pm

Imkrazzeeehhhh wrote:
TOTAL HIPOCRACY MAN. NOT COOL.


You're in no damn position to be talking when you make shit like this


Anyway. The proportions are spot on, but the legs need to be redone, and it needs to look a little more "feathery."

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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Thu Nov 24, 2011 6:51 pm

I plan on posting the original drawing tomorrow or Saturday, since I don't have school tomorrow.

EDIT: So...I lost the original.
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PostSubject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando   Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:33 pm

UPDATE (Finally): Added some characters I made up.

I drew them all in a moving car, so they aren't exactly my best work.
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