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Tao-Sensei Member


Posts: 977 Join date: 2011-02-06 Age: 14 Location: Not Canada, if that's what you think.
 | Subject: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:20 pm | |
| Yeah, I decided to make one, since I like art like stuff... (Characters are color coded. Same Color=From same category.) Animals=RedOC's=OrangeVGC's=YellowParakeetWARNING: Incredibly length long picture. | Spoiler: | | |  Don't you just love parakeets? I do. I drew this little guy in the last ten minutes of my art class, so there are eraser lines and is quite rough around the sides. |
Karine
| Spoiler: | | |  Karine is the main protagonist of my maybe/maybe won't be written planned stories about a land above the clouds that is advanced in technology while still being a island about as big as a regular neighborhood that harbours the people known as the Plebes, far from the dangers of what they call the "Terra Macrocosmus" about to be plunged into their worst fears. Karine is a 16 year old Healer who has been training in Convalesce Magic for 10 years, which is the art of healing (obviously...). Her younger brother fell off the side of the island in the past, but she has gotten very close to Alto, her robotic puppet replacement of a brother and often defends him if necessary. Karine doesn't remember much about her brother, since Alto never seemed to play the same role as her brother in even having a different name. |
Alto
| Spoiler: | | |  Alto is one of the main characters in the same of my maybe/maybe won't be written planned stories as Karine. Alto is a robotic puppet built by Karine's parent to replace Karine's younger brother, who died by falling off the side of the island 10 years before. He is very affluent in Pseudo Magic, which focuses on using artificial spirits to scare or confuse opponents. Nobody else takes an interest in Pseudo, though. |
Ersa
| Spoiler: | | |  Ersa is another main character from the same story as Karine and Alto. Ersa is a girl the same age of 16 as Karine and is Karine's best friend. Even though she is Karine's best friend, Ersa does not show a liking to Alto, asking Karine how her parents could do such a thing as replace her brother with a puppet. Karine accepts Ersa's opinion, but still does not like it. Ersa is skilled in Archery, but often belittles her skill and says there are others much better than her. |
Arus
| Spoiler: | | |  Arus is another main character from the same story as the three before. Arus is a ninja who is a part of a not big, but not small resistance against the ongoing darkness on Terra Macrocosmus. He is shrouded in mystery and does not like talking about his past. Thus, very little is known about him. |
Ceila
| Spoiler: | | |  I'm just going all out on characters for my book. I'm planning one more character, actually...Anyways, Ceila is Ersa's younger sister at the age of 15 and is yet another main character in the story. Unlike Ersa, she takes a large liking to Alto, as both of them do things nobody takes interest in, thus causing obscurity in both of them. Ceila takes interest in Terraforming, which focuses on creating or manipulating the Earth and it's nature. Ceila doesn't talk much and likes to keep to herself. |
Rose
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 (Desc. coming soon) |
Avios
| Spoiler: | | |  (Desc. coming soon) |
Desarae
| Spoiler: | | |  (Desc. coming soon) |
Taokaka
| Spoiler: | | |  I couldn't resist drawing this, I love Tao too much...Anyways, this is a drawing of one of Tao's entrances [/b][/u][/color]in Blazblue. You know, the one where she pushes up against the screen. |
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Nicko Member


Posts: 621 Join date: 2011-01-07 Location: Someplace where the Kangaroos run wild.
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:37 pm | |
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Luke Member

Posts: 1156 Join date: 2011-10-31 Age: 18 Location: Germany
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:39 pm | |
| This is quite good. I like it. If you added shading, and added more detail, you could sell it at an art show. XD and also, we're ALL dorks here, man. |
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C_Mill24 Member


Posts: 2389 Join date: 2011-05-14 Age: 18 Location: Stuck here with nowhere to go.
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:41 pm | |
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Kiddragon Member


Posts: 2715 Join date: 2010-09-23 Age: 16 Location: Here
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:43 pm | |
| Well...
Your bird anatomy is not so bad, but I think you screwed up the legs a bit. I suggest you to look at real birds images, then try to reproduce what you saw. _________________ ~DESU! | The story of a spriter: | | | | Damian wrote: | | Mari Futanari wrote: | | Damian wrote: | | Way back in day, when I started out as a sprite, I made these. |
Waaaaaaiit, wait wait wait. You were a sprite? |
Actually, I started as a pixel. Then I grew into a sprite, but I wanted to be a sprite that could reproduce, so I became a spriter. As soon as I picked up a harem I became a sprite sheet.
True story. |
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"Death is a sweet fruit that we are brought to taste once in our life, but that is always at our fingertips." -Megu Kakizaki, Rozen Maiden. |
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Tao-Sensei Member


Posts: 977 Join date: 2011-02-06 Age: 14 Location: Not Canada, if that's what you think.
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:50 pm | |
| Yeah, I know, it's not very good. I'm guessing it's just good for a ten minute sketch.
I was always more of the musical kind of art guy anyways. |
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Engie Member


Posts: 487 Join date: 2011-06-22
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Fri Nov 18, 2011 6:02 pm | |
| | Tao-Sensei wrote: | | Don't you just love parakeets? |
Yeah, they're my favorite food. |
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Ken Takazuki Member


Posts: 849 Join date: 2010-10-30 Age: 14 Location: Well I
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Fri Nov 18, 2011 6:14 pm | |
| | Nicko wrote: | Umm, if you want me to put it in the most critical way I can say...
| Spoiler: | | | It looks like crap. |
| If it was critical you would actually SAY what's wrong with it instead of saying it's crap.
Anyways, it looks not half bad. The lines look a bit squiggly, and it'll look better if it had shading(If you know how to shade well). You need to separate the fur and the legs. To that you'd just have to have a bit of fur between them to tell which is the leg and fur. The lines on the wing looks bad though, it looks like you went a bit lazy thar. And lastly, the feet needs to be wrapped more around the branch or stick. |
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Veevee Member


Posts: 826 Join date: 2010-07-28 Age: 20 Location: Playing with other boys.
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Fri Nov 18, 2011 7:01 pm | |
| | Nicko wrote: | Umm, if you want me to put it in the most critical way I can say...
| Spoiler: | | | It looks like crap. |
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Don't listen to him.
He doesn't understand that people aren't made of boxes, so he's probably wrong about bird anatomy, too.
It's fine, yeah the legs need work, but it's certainly not crap. |
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Tao-Sensei Member


Posts: 977 Join date: 2011-02-06 Age: 14 Location: Not Canada, if that's what you think.
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Fri Nov 18, 2011 7:03 pm | |
| Well, actually, I drew another Parakeet a few classes before this that looks the same, because I thought it might be too small though, I did a redraw, as the one you see here. I could show the original if you want, I think it's better. |
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Nicko Member


Posts: 621 Join date: 2011-01-07 Location: Someplace where the Kangaroos run wild.
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Sat Nov 19, 2011 5:18 pm | |
| Fucking hell, that's the last time I say anything about judging art at this forum.
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TehKrazeh1 Member


Posts: 2319 Join date: 2011-04-30 Age: 93 Location: Heddkwarterz
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Sat Nov 19, 2011 9:11 pm | |
| | Chaosvii7 wrote: | | Nicko wrote: | Umm, if you want me to put it in the most critical way I can say...
| Spoiler: | | | It looks like crap. |
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Don't listen to him. |
TOTAL HIPOCRACY MAN. NOT COOL.
That bird... it's shape and texture are so off. The seem a bit rough, and how you say, "perfected." Like a remastered show looks less realistic but more for graphics. Too round at the top, a bit too straight around the wings and torso. |
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Ungrateful Dead Lord Weaboo the Second

Posts: 1471 Join date: 2010-07-24 Age: 18 Location: Inside the TV
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Tao-Sensei Member


Posts: 977 Join date: 2011-02-06 Age: 14 Location: Not Canada, if that's what you think.
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Thu Nov 24, 2011 6:51 pm | |
| I plan on posting the original drawing tomorrow or Saturday, since I don't have school tomorrow.
EDIT: So...I lost the original. |
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Tao-Sensei Member


Posts: 977 Join date: 2011-02-06 Age: 14 Location: Not Canada, if that's what you think.
 | Subject: Re: Tao-Sensei's Arte Mostrando Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:33 pm | |
| UPDATE (Finally): Added some characters I made up.
I drew them all in a moving car, so they aren't exactly my best work. |
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