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*heart*
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 |  Subject: My sprite edits  Tue Dec 13, 2011 1:57 pm | |
| I wanted to know what's you opinion about my spite edits. I'm new in this area and just edited two sprites for now. I know the edits suck, but what what I actually want to know is: Do you think I should continue trying to edit sprites or should I just give up? My First edit, Classic Roll in MvC style:  My second edit, Athena Asamiya with KOF XI outfit(Her pose isn't done yet, this is just a WIP, may continue if I get better at editing sprites):  Emma Frost WIP:  I know it's not that good, but I'm still working on improving her. Please, tell me what you think and how could I improve it.
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Tue Dec 13, 2011 4:52 pm | |
| The skin for Athena could use a bit more contrast. Other than that, good job...
I have the feeling I forgot something rather important.
EDIT: Wait, I forgot. The arm with her hand curved up looks rather noodley. |
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*heart*
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Tue Dec 13, 2011 5:05 pm | |
| | Red[SP] wrote: | The skin for Athena could use a bit more contrast. Other than that, good job...
I have the feeling I forgot something rather important.
EDIT: Wait, I forgot. The arm with her hand curved up looks rather noodley. |
Thank's for helping me, I'll try to fix the hand, but if possible, could you help me with contrast, I don't think I'm really good with it. |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Tue Dec 13, 2011 5:20 pm | |
| Sure.
PM me what you need to know or if you need my assistance. |
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*heart*
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Tue Dec 13, 2011 5:22 pm | |
| | Red[SP] wrote: | Sure.
PM me what you need to know or if you need my assistance. |
Thank's, I'm trying to fix the hand right now. It's difficult, but I think I can do that. |
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Luke
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Tue Dec 13, 2011 5:26 pm | |
| They're pretty good for a first try. :3
Just fix the "noodly" arm, and it'll be fine. |
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*heart*
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Tue Dec 13, 2011 5:36 pm | |
| | Lukepi wrote: | They're pretty good for a first try. :3
Just fix the "noodly" arm, and it'll be fine. |
Thank's, I hope I can fix that arm, it looks really weird. When I fix it I'll put the updated version here. I will also try to add contrast as Red[SP] said, she looks really pale now that I noticed. |
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*heart*
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Wed Dec 14, 2011 6:24 am | |
| Well, I tried to fix the arm, but wasn't lucky at all. It still looks awful, here is what I could do for now:  |
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Futaraptor
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Wed Dec 14, 2011 7:37 am | |
| Suggestion: move the elbow higher up the arm. Right now, it's positioned at her wrist. _________________  | aldroim wrote: | | allrigth soo can anyone give sugestion to i make an characters? |
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*heart*
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:21 pm | |
| Added Phoenix. It's not finished yet, so it will still improve. I will also upload Athena again when it's complete, I'm still working on her too. |
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TehKrazeh1
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:29 pm | |
| Just for some early critique, I think it's either that the head and hair are too big, or the body is too small.
Also, ever thought of customs? |
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*heart*
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:38 pm | |
| | Chrono Trigger wrote: | Just for some early critique, I think it's either that the head and hair are too big, or the body is too small.
Also, ever thought of customs? |
Well, I'll try to fix it, her body is small in some parts and since it's edited from Eve, her hair has a lot of volume, which makes her head look kinda big. And about custom, I extremely failed trying to make my first and never tried again since then. THE_DOCTOR, who is tutoring me, said he is still learning custom spriting, so he couldn't help me with it. Maybe I may try it again sometime, but I don't think I'll be able to make a custom one. |
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*heart*
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:38 am | |
| Update: Tried to fix Phoenix's hair and head.
Well, I started trying to make custom sprites with Fiendlord's help, but I already started having problems at the first step. I don't know if I will be able to finish a custom one yet, I think I don't have much ability with spriting. |
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Tao-Sensei
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Sun Jan 22, 2012 9:08 am | |
| Well, I for one, am glad you are putting an effort into trying to learn custom spriting.
Now, as for the sprites...
~Roll: Looks fine.
~Athena: The noodly arm
~Phoenix: The sizing problem everyone else mentioned.
So basically, I was ninja'd by everyone else. |
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*heart*
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| | Subject: Re: My sprite edits Sun Jan 22, 2012 9:24 am | |
| | Tao-Sensei wrote: | Well, I for one, am glad you are putting an effort into trying to learn custom spriting.
Now, as for the sprites...
~Roll: Looks fine.
~Athena: The noodly arm
~Phoenix: The sizing problem everyone else mentioned.
So basically, I was ninja'd by everyone else. |
Thank's for the feedback. I'm still trying to fix Athena, but will only post the update when the stance is also done. And with Phoenix, I'll still try to fix the body, the update was basically to show the hair(it's still not looking good, but I did the best I could). |
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