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2N050N2
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 |  Subject: Craykid2noson2's sprites  Fri Dec 23, 2011 7:14 pm | |
| Epic Mickey Paintbrush:  100% custom. Angry Birds Orange Bird:  100% custom. Keep in mind the Orange Bird is not brawlified... yet. Mighty Eagle:  100% custom. It's not brawlified yet, either. It's also not the best out there, either. That's it for now. I'll add more later.
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Meta-Mind
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Join date: 2011-08-20
Location: The Temple of Hylia
| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Fri Dec 23, 2011 7:20 pm | |
| That's actually pretty bad.
However, I do see room for improvement. Some of your lines look a little shaky, and the brush has no outlines. The shading looks strange at one point on the handle, but other than those, it's actually an okay sprite. |
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The Bean
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Age: 14
Location: East Blue
| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Fri Dec 23, 2011 10:29 pm | |
| It's a little decent for a starter but it lacks shading and outline like meta mind said,the 2nd line is also shaky. |
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Waddle Dont
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Join date: 2011-02-21
Location: I DUNNO MARS?!
| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Fri Dec 23, 2011 10:52 pm | |
| Not too bad. In comparison to my stuff, It kicks ass. |
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The Bean
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| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Fri Dec 23, 2011 11:13 pm | |
| @cohost
sooooooooo what happened to your fedora? |
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Ken Takazuki
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Age: 14
Location: Well I
| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Fri Dec 23, 2011 11:55 pm | |
| He gets more comments than me with only one sprite. *goes to corner and cries*
I'd say it's better than the other crap I see done by others here. I wouldn't call it crap, nice start. The furry part needs to look a bit more...furry. The wood part also looks too thick. Other than the other things said, nice job. |
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The Bean
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| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:03 am | |
| @Ken
it's not just you bro |
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Ken Takazuki
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| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:17 am | |
| | treboar wrote: | @Ken
it's not just you bro |
Pshaw, that was only for about 3 of your last post. The rest was actually replied to. ;-; |
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The Bean
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| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Sat Dec 24, 2011 1:29 am | |
| so what? your's too was replied......well after those 3 unanswered posts |
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2N050N2
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Age: 16
| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Sat Dec 24, 2011 6:48 am | |
| Thanks guys! And @Everyone I know it has room for improvement, but it's my first one. Also, @Ken, it's thick because... it appeared that way in the game, unless I'm mistaken.
EDIT: Added Orange Bird from Angry Birds. |
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Tao-Sensei
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Age: 14
Location: Not Canada, if that's what you think.
| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:21 am | |
| Not to bad if it was a caricature...
The shading is fairly light, and the outline is shaky. Probably other stuff I missed. |
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The Bean
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| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:03 am | |
| Needs more shading though,never played angry birds though so I know nothing of that
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C_Mill24
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Location: Stuck here with nowhere to go.
| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:07 am | |
| The bird needs black around his eyes. |
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Meta-Mind
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| | Subject: Re: Craykid2noson2's sprites Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:30 am | |
| You should use more shades, I think. Try three or four. |
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