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TehKrazeh1
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 |  Subject: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock!  Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:54 pm | |
| Entrance- Stance-  Walk-  Run- Turn Around- Jump- Double jump- Back jump- Back double jump- Falling- Land- Basic combo Neutral Special: Heat PhalanxINSERT NECESSARY ANIMATIONS HERE. AirINSERT NECESSARY ANIMATIONS HERE. Bardock charges a flame in his fist, and readies an attack. You can charge this attack up to its peak, like Ike or Roy (didn't mention Marth because he doesn't use fire). When you let go, he does a ground uppercut, and smashes the foe into the air. The longer you charge, the greater the fire effect, knockback, and damage. If you charge it to the peak and miss, you receive high damage similar to Ike in Brawl.Side Special: Flash SpiritINSERT NECESSARY ANIMATIONS HERE. AirINSERT NECESSARY ANIMATIONS HERE. Up Special: FlightINSERT NECESSARY ANIMATIONS HERE. AirINSERT NECESSARY ANIMATIONS HERE. Down Special: DivinationUse:  AirSame as ground.Forward SmashSmash- Up SmashSmash- Down Smash-Smash-  Loop frame 2 for charge Neutral air- Up air- Forward air- Back air- Down air- Aeriel Lands- Knockback:  Crouch- Down tilt- Up tilt- Forward tilt-  Dash attack- Grab miss- Grab- Pummel- Foward throw- Up throw- Back throw- Down throw- Final Smash- Guard-  Loop frame 2 Back Roll- Forward Roll- Sidestep- Air dodge- Tech- Wall-Tech- Wall-Jump- Shield Break (Dizzy)- Sleep- Wake up- Hurt 1 (Hit)- Hurt 2 (Sent Flying)-  Hurt 3 (Dead)- Hurt 4 (Getting back up)-  Get-up attack- Edge lean- Hang- Ledge attack- Ledge roll- Assist trophy- Hammer- Item Swing- Fire Flower Hold- Walk While Using Item- Item Shoot- Item toss- Forward: Up: Down: Back: Hold heavy object- Walk w/heavy object- H.O Throw-Forward: Up: Down: Wall-Hit- Climb ladder- Ride down ladder- Crawl- Swim- Drown- G&W Ball- Super Spicy Curry- Electric Hit- Up Taunt- Side Taunt- Down Taunt- Win- Lose/clap- Revival Platform- Misc. Attacks and Sound Effects Win Theme
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Reix
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:57 pm | |
| Divination is shaky.
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That's like you waking up one day to find you've evolved an immunity to slash wounds, then immediately leaping out of bed and sprinting off into the woods so you can use your newfound abilities to hunt down a grizzly bear, rip its claws off and start beating wolves with them.
They do the opposite of dying. They live even harder.
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TehKrazeh1
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 5:00 pm | |
| | Reiforce wrote: | | Divination is shaky. |
For dynamic effect. Did that on purpose, and it actually took a while to get it all precise, and all over the place. Since, y'know, he can't really control it much. I'll add descriptions soon. |
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FSK
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 5:28 pm | |
| The basic combo...is kind of annoying to me. The fact that the combo is pretty much all on his back foot and doesn't change (I would like something to be happening with that back foot) position at all. It just looks like he's reaching too much to get to his target.
Other than that, it all looks good. I would comment on the Divination, but it looks like you got that all cleared up. |
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Meta-Mind
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 6:26 pm | |
| Another DBZ character?
Anyway, Combo looks odd and somewhat shaky. |
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TehKrazeh1
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 6:33 pm | |
| | Meta-Mind wrote: | Another DBZ character?
Anyway, Combo looks odd and somewhat shaky. |
Lol, yeah, another one. It's hard to resist.
Yeah, I can see that as stated by the previous user. It's meant to be a dash punch. I'll fix that. |
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trebean
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 6:37 pm | |
| How does Divination work?
Also why is you combo just 2 hits? or is that possible? |
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TehKrazeh1
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 6:50 pm | |
| | trebean wrote: | How does Divination work?
Also why is you combo just 2 hits? or is that possible? |
I'll post explanations soon. Probably tomorrow.
I dunno, let's ask Goku. |
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trebean
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:00 pm | |
| | The Fiendlord wrote: | | trebean wrote: | How does Divination work?
Also why is you combo just 2 hits? or is that possible? |
I'll post explanations soon. Probably tomorrow.
I dunno, let's ask Goku. |
Well that made me stupid, anyway I just noticed something, His tail/belt is gone |
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TehKrazeh1
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:04 pm | |
| | trebean wrote: | | The Fiendlord wrote: | | trebean wrote: | How does Divination work?
Also why is you combo just 2 hits? or is that possible? |
I'll post explanations soon. Probably tomorrow.
I dunno, let's ask Goku. |
Well that made me stupid, anyway I just noticed something, His tail/belt is gone |
CRAP, the damn TAIL. THAT'S WHAT WAS WEIRD ABOUT THIS. I'll fix that. |
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:38 pm | |
| Think the Divination effect might want to be made in Flash instead? |
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arctic the fox
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:46 pm | |
| What do we say about motion blurs?[/talking to young child voice] |
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Reix
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:50 pm | |
| | arctic the fox wrote: | | What do we say about motion blurs?[/talking to young child voice] |
We say "He's using them correctly in this situation."
Motion blurs in flash are for sword swings and stuff, not fists.
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That's like you waking up one day to find you've evolved an immunity to slash wounds, then immediately leaping out of bed and sprinting off into the woods so you can use your newfound abilities to hunt down a grizzly bear, rip its claws off and start beating wolves with them.
They do the opposite of dying. They live even harder.
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arctic the fox
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:54 pm | |
| I just thought motion blurs in general had to be separately made. |
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Leo Cantus
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| | Subject: Re: A True Proud Saiyan: Bardock! Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:05 pm | |
| Will he be able to transform into Super Saiyan for the Final Smash? or will it be final spiritual cannon (not sure if this is the name)? |
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