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TehKrazeh1
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 |  Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me)  Sun Mar 18, 2012 8:12 pm | |
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Uoyalz
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Sun Mar 18, 2012 8:15 pm | |
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Leo Cantus
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Sun Mar 18, 2012 8:33 pm | |
| You should fix the others before making new ones. You are not making progress. |
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TehKrazeh1
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Mon Mar 19, 2012 12:57 pm | |
| | Leo Cantus wrote: | | You should fix the others before making new ones. You are not making progress. |
But I'm not trying to make progress... There's nothing to make progress on. |
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Leo Cantus
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Mon Mar 19, 2012 1:30 pm | |
| | DerpyZelda wrote: | | Leo Cantus wrote: | | You should fix the others before making new ones. You are not making progress. |
But I'm not trying to make progress... There's nothing to make progress on. |
You don't care if they are good or bad? |
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TehKrazeh1
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Mon Mar 19, 2012 1:41 pm | |
| | Leo Cantus wrote: | | DerpyZelda wrote: | | Leo Cantus wrote: | | You should fix the others before making new ones. You are not making progress. |
But I'm not trying to make progress... There's nothing to make progress on. |
You don't care if they are good or bad? |
Oh, that's what you meant. I care, but no one gives two shits to actually give me some serious critique on any of them. Like UD, just being an annoyance, and same with Yoh.
I need some real advice. Since no one is willing to help, I trail on. |
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Leo Cantus
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Mon Mar 19, 2012 1:54 pm | |
| | DerpyZelda wrote: | | Leo Cantus wrote: | | DerpyZelda wrote: | | Leo Cantus wrote: | | You should fix the others before making new ones. You are not making progress. |
But I'm not trying to make progress... There's nothing to make progress on. |
You don't care if they are good or bad? |
Oh, that's what you meant. I care, but no one gives two shits to actually give me some serious critique on any of them. Like UD, just being an annoyance, and same with Yoh.
I need some real advice. Since no one is willing to help, I trail on. |
I see...
I'd love to give some advice, but I hardly ever edit JUS sprites.
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TehKrazeh1
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Mon Mar 19, 2012 2:25 pm | |
| | Leo Cantus wrote: | | DerpyZelda wrote: | | Leo Cantus wrote: | | DerpyZelda wrote: | | Leo Cantus wrote: | | You should fix the others before making new ones. You are not making progress. |
But I'm not trying to make progress... There's nothing to make progress on. |
You don't care if they are good or bad? |
Oh, that's what you meant. I care, but no one gives two shits to actually give me some serious critique on any of them. Like UD, just being an annoyance, and same with Yoh.
I need some real advice. Since no one is willing to help, I trail on. |
I see...
I'd love to give some advice, but I hardly ever edit JUS sprites.
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You don't have to do it to know it mang. |
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Leo Cantus
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:17 pm | |
| Ohh well... I think that in what you are mostly failing is in shaping the head and detaling the face, especialy the eyes. Also, I think you are covering the faces too much with the hair in most of the sprites. |
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TehKrazeh1
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:20 pm | |
| | Leo Cantus wrote: | | Ohh well... I think that in what you are mostly failing is in shaping the head and detaling the face, especialy the eyes. Also, I think you are covering the faces too much with the hair in most of the sprites. |
Finally, good advice. Any ones in particular? |
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Leo Cantus
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:38 pm | |
| | DerpyZelda wrote: | | Leo Cantus wrote: | | Ohh well... I think that in what you are mostly failing is in shaping the head and detaling the face, especialy the eyes. Also, I think you are covering the faces too much with the hair in most of the sprites. |
Finally, good advice. Any ones in particular? |
The eyes/face problem is more notable in Tien, Chiaotzu, Jamcha and Murasaki. It really doesn't feel like them.
And Suigetsu and Jiraya have to show a little more their faces.
edit: Also, there is a strange pixel shifting in Nam's turbant; and the dot in his forehead changes positions. |
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TehKrazeh1
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:41 pm | |
| | Leo Cantus wrote: | | DerpyZelda wrote: | | Leo Cantus wrote: | | Ohh well... I think that in what you are mostly failing is in shaping the head and detaling the face, especialy the eyes. Also, I think you are covering the faces too much with the hair in most of the sprites. |
Finally, good advice. Any ones in particular? |
The eyes/face problem is more notable in Tien, Chiaotzu, Jamcha and Murasaki. It really doesn't feel like them.
And Suigetsu and Jiraya have to show a little more their faces.
edit: Also, there is a strange pixel shifting in Nam's turbant; and the dot in his forehead changes positions. |
Oh, I fixed that Nam problem on my sheet. |
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TehKrazeh1
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Sun Apr 15, 2012 9:12 pm | |
| UPDATE: Added a Saibamen. |
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Damian
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Tue Apr 17, 2012 9:31 am | |
| You should've stopped after making 1 or 2 of these things, other then getting the hang of concepts that you shouldn't get to right now, these won't learn you anything. All you are doing is taking a sprite and then making just about the exact same thing. It's really not impressive.
What you should work on, is your human anatomy. That guy with the giant orange hand has blocky legs/feet and is actually just blocky all over (a lot of your stuff is, really). The 'shading' (or the lack of shading, rather) on the hair is something you could easily have caught yourself. It's bad.
Jiraiya's hands. Just.. what. It looks like you just downsized the hands of Naruto Ninja Clash Run Thing Dash Chakra Senpai Sama and rolled with that. It looks like a cluttered mess of pixels, not even ment to resemble a hand. and the upper hand lacks a finger. These are detailed that you can't possibly hope people overlook. Why did you even overlook them?
All in all, most of the stuff that you actually did yourself is blocky and has a very poor outline and detailing (shading too, but fix the other things before you try to get the hang of shading. Please), and the rest is just a demake of the original sprites. Not worth your time, not worth our time.
Stop being 'in the JUS buisness', and just go on to make outlines with JUST base colours (i.e. no shading), study up on your human anatomy, and stop using other sprites as reference because then you just copy everything. Use pictures or models from games, I dunno, just not sprites.
Sorry to be harsh, but you wanted critique. |
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Agent Emerald
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| | Subject: Re: JUS Conversions (Edited by Me) Fri Apr 20, 2012 8:19 pm | |
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