Sprites I made.(Lukepi goes on="You have no sense" Me=Sure>.>

PS pingpinghe08 is my username on youtube.

IMO, I think #2 looks better

There is so much wrong with this I don't know where to start.

Why don't we start with something easy, like the pants. Those are some terrible pants.

those aren't pants. they are long underwear.

That doesn't make them any less terrible.

I'm sorry, but these just aren't good at all.

I know, i will admit myself I SUCK

I have to agree. Its pretty bad. Proportions are wrong, there's no good shading, not very smooth either. However this is probably one of your early sprites, so don't get too discouraged. I suggest you look at other sprites and learn what you can looking at those, but if you can stand to sit down and read tips about how to sprite, do it.

Before attempting other forms of anatomy, I suggest you learn human anatomy first.

It's more like bad line art.

I don't even know where to start. So I'll let other people explain.

But if I have to say one thing, it'd be the outline, It's awful. There's random black and the outline contrasts with the overall color.

I know how to fix this.

Okay, first, reopen the program you used to make this, open up the sheet, and clear the whole thing. Next, read a tutorial to make a better sprite.

Try studying a few sprite styles, or practice with a few sprite bases, after that, open paint and go ASS WILD!! (Again, that's how I actually sprite)