Ninja_pig_pro
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Join date: 2012-02-19
 |  Subject: Someone please critique this sprite  Sun Apr 22, 2012 6:05 am | |
|  Can someone critique it? |
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Bob Mowzie
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Location: Land of Sprites and Crap
| | Subject: Re: Someone please critique this sprite Sun Apr 22, 2012 9:09 am | |
| Sorry, and I can tell that you're trying, but it's not good. It's better than your other sprites, but your linework needs much improvement. |
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Ninja_pig_pro
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Join date: 2012-02-19
| | Subject: Re: Someone please critique this sprite Sun Apr 22, 2012 10:05 am | |
| yea, I am failing at the head and stuff. I am waiting from the next sprite lesson pm from trebean.(It was better at start, but failed when it was resized) |
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The Bean
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Join date: 2010-08-13
Age: 14
Location: East Blue
| | Subject: Re: Someone please critique this sprite Sun Apr 22, 2012 10:35 am | |
| | Clubby_the_bear wrote: | | yea, I am failing at the head and stuff. I am waiting from the next sprite lesson pm from trebean.(It was better at start, but failed when it was resized) |
THe only Computer I have now is my Cousin's, also now I'm too paranoid to click anything with my mouse, because of the stupid click limit.
Now, I'm mostly at the Internet Cafe, or kicking it while playing the DS, ot some PSX
EDIT:
Why did you resized him anyway?
I never watched this new fangled Doraemon shows, I mostly watched the old ones, blame GMA TV for that.
Even so, shouldn't he be small? Doraemon barely reached Nobita's Height, and Nobita's a kid |
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Ninja_pig_pro
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| | Subject: Re: Someone please critique this sprite Sun Apr 22, 2012 11:29 am | |
| Actually, I resized him SMALLER, so yeah... |
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Mr. Spaghetti
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Join date: 2011-12-22
Location: In toxicated
| | Subject: Re: Someone please critique this sprite Mon Apr 23, 2012 8:13 am | |
| The hat doesn't have any shading and neither does the inside of the ears.
The hat itself also looks squished in there. |
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Tao-Sensei
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Join date: 2011-02-06
Age: 14
Location: Not Canada, if that's what you think.
| | Subject: Re: Someone please critique this sprite Mon Apr 23, 2012 3:12 pm | |
| Hat is to flat.
There's something wrong with the rest of the sprite in general, but I can't put my finger on it. I think it's the outline. |
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