Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face

Subject: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:06 pm

You know I'm getting back into spriting, and I need a place to show everything off, so here is where I will show my stuff.

DBZ

Critique is welcome

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:22 pm

These sprites look a lot like JCXD's (Cooler). If they're his, you should just use his Supernova effect since Goku's Spirit Bomb has always looked bad. Anyways, the animation itself is really choppy. Needs one more frame for while he's lifting.

All of them have bad hair animations. They move choppily, and they jump off the character's head sometimes.

Gohan's hair shouldn't have that extra highlight on the left.

Gohan's clothing animation needs work.

Earring in Vegetto's idle is too jumpy. His highlights need some tweaking too. Plus, they're red. Actually, they also have highlights similar to the current Gotenks highlight of JUS. It should be like that, but less of course.

Goten's animation is stiff as hell.

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:30 pm

Derp de Phisher wrote:

These sprites look a lot like JCXD's (Cooler). If they're his, you should just use his Supernova effect since Goku's Spirit Bomb has always looked bad. Anyways, the animation itself is really choppy. Needs one more frame for while he's lifting.I will gix that and also who is JCXD? The person who made the 5th form cooler is Liveitbig who is helping me make a sheet.

All of them have bad hair animations. They move choppily, and they jump off the character's head sometimes.I disagree with this

Gohan's hair shouldn't have that extra highlight on the left.Yes he does. That is one of his bangs. Look at a picture of Future Gohan

Gohan's clothing animation needs work.I agree

Earring in Vegetto's idle is too jumpy. His highlights need some tweaking too. Plus, they're red. Actually, they also have highlights similar to the current Gotenks highlight of JUS. It should be like that, but less of course.Where the hell do you see any red

Goten's animation is stiff as hell.I know, the hair moveemnt was all I was showing. My friend over at deviantart was having problems with making hair movement so I made some for him, he only gave me one frame of his idle so I used it for the quick animation

RED!

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon Apr 23, 2012 3:48 pm

Blitz n' Barrage wrote:

DBZ

This needs more movement frames.

This does to, the head needs more shading, and the ball needs a more gradual grow.

The hair bothers me.

This is just plain bad.

Is his hair supposed to look detached?

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon Apr 23, 2012 3:55 pm

I know that the Goten is bad, but what do you mean the hair looks like it is detached? And the Cooler animations aren't finished yet, I am working on a sheet

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:04 pm

Blitz n' Barrage wrote:

I know that the Goten is bad, but what do you mean the hair looks like it is detached? And the Cooler animations aren't finished yet, I am working on a sheet

Whoever the earring one is, he looks like he some sort of bald spot that gets continually covered by odd hair movement.

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:06 pm

Reiforce wrote:

Blitz n' Barrage wrote:

DBZ

This needs more movement frames.

This does to, the head needs more shading, and the ball needs a more gradual grow.

The hair bothers me.

This is just plain bad.

Is his hair supposed to look detached?

Mm, looks like I wasn't the only one with the problem with hair.

Also, when I said red highlights, I mean that sort of "hair shading" across the hair. Like Vegeta should have red ones, but his are gray like Goku, and Gohan's win and lose as SSJ have blue like in the anime.

Spoiler:

Now that I look even closer at it, it should basically be a recolor and resizing of Gotenks's JUS hair as base. Like this:

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:17 pm

Do you want to see how Vegetto looks in the anime, because video games aren't canon

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:22 pm

Blitz n' Barrage wrote:

Do you want to see how Vegetto looks in the anime, because video games aren't canon

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:23 pm

Hmmm we have quite a conundrum. I'll watch the episode and see which one is right

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:24 pm

Blitz n' Barrage wrote:

Hmmm we have quite a conundrum. I'll watch the episode and see which one is right

I dunno man, I usually watch the series, and on different angles and different lighting, it always changes.

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon May 14, 2012 5:33 pm

I feel like customing a sprite, to see how good I have gotten. Any requests?

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon May 14, 2012 6:15 pm

Groose from Skyward Sword.

Subject: Re: Blitz's Sprite-House Kick to the Face Mon May 14, 2012 6:17 pm

Blitz n' Barrage wrote:

I feel like customing a sprite, to see how good I have gotten. Any requests?

Well, depend of the challenge you want.

With or without a base image?

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